Telling ... too much telling!

::sigh::
Since I've been working on my outline for so long, I'm super used to throwing ideas out and arranging them, not in making them sound good.  Now I'm working on Exchange, and I'm having to slowly break out of that.

Lots of revisions using AutoCrit.  Love that website.

I kinda missed these characters.  Hopefully, in revisiting them, I'll get another idea for them and write something else in the spring.  I guess every writer goes through this, but I'm a little afraid of running out of ideas.